Friday, July 8, 2016

My writing task

Hi my name is Rain and today I am going to be blogging about my writing task. For the writing task you had to write about anything you want but it has to b your personal best. 


Here is a photo of my writing task.

Agent Sara the monkeys diary

“Hello my name is agent Sara the monkey I am looking for a mystery to solve but the other monkeys won’t help me so here I am wandering around and looking for a mystery.”
Agent Sara the monkey
Mysteries solved
“I haven’t solved any mysteries yet but later on I will. The mysteries I want to solve is a Missing ring, a missing cat, a missing banna, a missing toilet, a missing tree, a lost monkey, a missing playground and more I just haven’t figured out more I really want to be a good agent and become famous.”
“I live in a house in the jungle the other animals think it’s weird to live in a house but I think that it’s more better to live in a house then it is out there besides if I lived out there where will all my work go?”  
“I do not have monkey friends I have other animal friends and they are Zack the duck, Ella the elephant, Jay the jaguar, Wolfy the wolf and lots more I just have not seen them in a while so I don't know there names.”

“Right now I am in the jungle park having a lunch break and after this I will keep finding mysteries but I am getting tired so I better have a little snooze in my comfortable bed with my agent blanky. I’LL see you latter by my diary.”

“Wow that was a big snooze What's this note on the door it’s from my friend Zack the duck it says”
Dear Sara

Hello I hope you get this message it’s really important. My pond has a big crocodile in it and I need your help can you get this crocodile out it’s eating my house can you please help me.

P.s I’m at my new pond by my mums pond.

Your sincerely Zack  

“Don't worry Zack I’m on the way I’m going to become a real Agent my dream has come true. I hope I get a shiny metal so that I can hang it on the wall I saved for when I get one. So I went off to Zacks pond In my banana boat there's a big Lake to his house so I need to bring my boat.  Off I went it was a big trip”.

“Finally I made it that was a long ride but I got to be quick there's an important job that needs to be solved” . Off I go. “Oh no” I said “that looks like a big crocodile how did it get there? Okay the first thing we need to do is figure out a way to get him out then we have to put together your house”. So me and Zack thought of a very good way to get the crocodile out and Zack came up with a very good idea. “Ok so one animal has to go in and get the wood then put it under the crocodile then we can get the rope wrapped around the tree and tie the wood together then we can get the other rope wrapped around the other tree and wrap it around the wood and then we all pull the crocodile out” said Zack. So we all did what Zack said it was very hard but we got the crocodile out. “Good job everyone there is just one more thing to do and that is put Zacks house together” I said “And I know just the way to do it let's take all the wood that is under the crocodile out and find a piece and put Zacks house together like a puzzle” and that is what we all did it was hard work but we got Zacks house back together and we finished the mission all together. “Wow great work everyone you did a fantastic job”

The mission was over and I got to go home and get ready for tomorrow. “Here I am at home I better put my banana boat away and head back to bed” I said proudly. “That was a very tough job and I’m glad that we all got it done as a team that was fun” I said feeling very proud of myself. I think that my mail box is full so I better go and see what’s inside”. So I went off and looked inside my mail box. Out popped party string and right in front of my eyes I saw gold shining so bright it looked like the sun. “ This is a dream come true” I said surprised. “I can also see an thank you note what does it say” I opened the note and this is what the note said.
Thank You Sara

Thank you Sara for helping me get that nasty crocodile out and putting my house back together it was a real duty so I am proud to say that you are now a real agent you will be taking harder missions now. I just want to say thank you one more time you made me happy and you made me think that you were a true friend.Thank you Sara you are a very good person.

From Zack   
“Wow this is a dream come true I am now a real agent it is now my duty to protect the world”

And agent Sara lived happily ever after.

I chose to write about this because I love little adventures and I thought it would be fun to write about it. My favourite part about my story is when she made her dream come true because she always wanted to be a agent and she now is.


  1. Wow! I loved reading that Rain. That was one of the best piece of writing I have ever read! There was lots of detail and my favourite part was when they worked together to get the crocodile out.
    Ka Pai and keep up the amazing work,
    Ruby :)

  2. Wow Rain I love your Writing Rain Amazing work Keep it up.